Why must there be feelings?

Why must there be feelings?

A Poem by Aubrey Harrell
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I wrote this while I was actually at school. This is how I was feeling just yesterday.

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Right now I am sitting in school,           My shell is cracking

But I feel like a fool.                   Little by little,

What I feel might not matter to you,      as people are attacking

But I want you to see it from my view.    From all different sides.


I am a blemish on this Earth,            Why must there be feelings?

Don’t deny it.

I don’t know what to do

Except to quit my life.


I am trying everyday,

But no one notices

The way I live

Someone must focus.


I feel like sobbing

Uncountable tears

While my head is throbbing

A thousand songs.


I need help

From these wonderful people,

Whelp they are blind

No use for me there.


I am left alone

With my thoughts.

Prone to the stones thrown

Everyday.

© 2017 Aubrey Harrell


Author's Note

Aubrey Harrell
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I like the feeling and I can feel it also. Every word I read from your piece reminds me of sweet little pains in life. Good one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aubrey Harrell

7 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate it!
Sincerely Cathartic

Great read.

Matthew

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So realistic and very well said to make the readers understand...
Yeah, why must there be feelings?
This poem explained that very well, and it was unique :)
Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aubrey Harrell

7 Years Ago

Thank you for this review. I appreciate it. :) Writing these help me to escape reality.
Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

No problem :))
I found this poem very relatable, and I've seen it several times with other people. I think it was very good, nice job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Aubrey Harrell

7 Years Ago

Oh I thought it was something original. I haven't seen anyone do something like this, but thank you .. read more
Cœur

7 Years Ago

No, I didn't mean the poem, I meant what the poem was about XD Sorry for the confusion.
Aubrey Harrell

7 Years Ago

Oh, I knew that then! Thanks for the confirmation!

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