TITLED!!

A poem that sounds like anything but a poem

 

I reread my recent poem

it sounded depressing

While I still think much of it is true

Don't think my life is boring

Cause it's not!

I can prove it

Because I just ate some ice cream

and it was tasty!!

so don't be hating on me cause

of my awesome/exciting life, haters!

So yeah... that was my poem

it doesnt really sound like a poem

But whatever XD =)

P.S it was plain ol chocolate ice cream ( my favorite )

 

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Lol, I don't really understand it, at least not exactly, but I still think it's worth a read. I found myself momentarily at a loss for words. I remembered reading about 'rereading my poem', and then the whole topic made a crazy twist until I end up wondering about the connection of ice cream and poem. Nonetheless, I agree about the chocolate ice cream. It does make life a lot better, enough for 'haters' to envy you for your happiness. Anyway, I think I'm babbling.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Tanesha A. Ray]

ha I really liked this!