My Dreams

I wrote this about a dream i had

Close your eyes.

Enter a new world.

 

Several colors make up the sky.

Blinding light shines above.

A palace filled with warriors, kings, musicians, and queens.

 

Music flows throw the air.

Smells tingle your nose.

 

Where am I.

want to know.

 

Then I open my eyes,

and I'm back home.

Reviews

[Taylor H.]

I loved this! I wish I could have dreams like this lol. I thought you needed to fix some grammar but other than that, this is a great short poem

[Keevan]

i really liked this. for some reason, it reminded me of Alice in Wonderland :/

But all in all, wonderful poem :)

[Tanya7]

i enjoyed reading this poem. it showed how simple it is to escape reality. i like that its short and to the point. you might want to add some imagery which shows rather than tell but overall it was a great write.

[Luna Northstar]

Awwwwwwww Very good job future poet, beautifully written. :)