To Fast

Slow down, slow down

to fast I am going.

Can't think.

 

No more pedal to the metal.

Take your foot of the gas.

Hose down the rubber.

 

What I have I missed in this life long race.

Friends I have lost.

School I have quit.

Love I have gave up on.

 

Why have I done this, just to keep myself from getting hurt.

 

Now it is time to slow down.

New freinds I have made.

School I have come again, but love must wait until I see him again.

 

But it will come why because I have slowed down. 

Author's Note

I am not sure if this poem is very good so please comment.

Reviews

[Taylor H.]

I liked this. There were spots where the lines got choppy but other than that I liked this poem

[Daisy123]

great job!

[Luna Northstar]

very good! love it!

[happy girl]

It is very, very good. No doubt about it. Well done :D