Colors

this peom is about falling under per preessure and losing your true self

The rainbow flashes before your eyes.

Showing all it's colors bright.

Red, yellow, violet, blue.

They all call out beckoning for you.

 

Lost in confusion you loose control.

Of one of the dearest things you hold.

Your own color, the color of you.

Is slowly striped away from you,

by the colors tht are jealous of you.

 

This happens to colors most,but colors few,

fight back for what truly belongs too you.

 

You struggle and sweat as you fight against you.

For it has also taken the color away for you.

In this fight you might lose a battle or two.

But you will win the war and get back what belongs to you.

 

Always keep your color true.

Never let it be taken away from you.

Reviews

[Taylor H.]

I liked you used the word "you" too much but other than that, this was another great poem! Wonderful job!

[floarealbastra10]

great poem, i like it

[zombiikillah666]

yea!!! *slides down rainbow**
*eats skittles**
keep rockin (:

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

i like it, but i think u say "you" to much. anyways good write