Curious Muse

Pondering...

I.

Celestial bodies turn, adhering to their role.

Penetrating all whom hear the soul;

Oceans vast with desolate love,

Affirmative evidence of someone above-

 

Help me learn of all these things,

Help me understand why we live.

Why we exist, why we breath;

The thirst for answers undulates and seethes,

Yearning to know more…

Yearning to know it all…

 

There is no absolute, save for God.

There is no faith without trials and suffering,

No faith without absence of power and proof.

Forgive me if my synapses are all too aloof.

Prove me wrong, set me straight,

So long as your intentions are absent of hate.

Yearning to know…

Reviews

[kara_marissa]

Impressively pen'd. I enjoyed this specific part the most. I look forward to reading your other work! Again, kudos on a great piece.
Kara M.

[Stoic Berserker]

::bows humbly:: thank you, that means more than you know when put so eloquently. I appreciate it muchly :)

[kara_marissa]

The pleasure is mine.

[Holly Mason]

causes thought thank you

[Stoic Berserker]

You're very welcome :)

[Andie]

We've all asked these questions before.. I don't think we CAN know until we die. I'm not saying that there is a Heaven, but I'm not saying that there isn't one. I find it better to just think in an agnostic manner.
Great poem by the way, very thought provoking.

[Stoic Berserker]

I appreciate it very much! It came in waves. I'll be posting parts 3 and 4 as soon as i finish reading the horse whisperer :3

[Andie]

Awesome! :3 Can't wait.