Watchful EyesA Story by Rebecca ConwayFlash fiction http://1000words.org.uk/watchful-eyes/Most days start off like this. Lurking
round the bookies waiting for opening, then it’s cap on floor, Chels’ll throw
me a quid while she’s rolling the shutters, two on last Friday of the month,
just to get me started. No one want’s to be the first to dig deep. That I’ve
learnt. And you be damned if it isn’t the poorest folk who give the most. Tried
and tested, that is. No setting up camp outside the Hilton anytime soon. Worse
outside bars, women strutting in with them red-soled shoes bought in sexual
favours by the suit clutching her arm, just pleased to be seen with anything
with a pair of tits and looser morals after a strawberry daiquiri. She’ll ditch
him soon and move up the food chain. But he’s a month behind on his mortgage
payment after them shoes. He hasn’t got a quid. He doesn’t give a s**t.
No, I’ve got it sussed. Prime location’s
where kids can throw you their lunch money coppers to look all charitable and
humanitarian in front of their friends. Where mums on the run rummage in hemp
bags for change and explain to wide-eyed toddlers that “we always have to help
the needy, pumpkin”, then offer you a half-empty smoothie and an avocado with
apologetic smiles. A greasy boy on his f*g break gets rid of excess
jingle-jangle so posh birds will only see crisp twenties when he buys them a
drink. You can tell a prime location by it’s proximity to an Iceland, or maybe
a Greggs, and usually there’ll be fat lasses in leggings so tight you can see
the cellulite shaking as they walk by. It all depends on the conditions.
Environmental factors, if you will. Location. Weather. Alcohol consumption. A
precise scientific balance, and I know the formula.
Mostly I’m done by five. I catch the 17.09
to Highbridge Street. Always a window seat. Never the very back. People stare,
sure. I haven’t got a can of Special Brew in a brown paper bag. I’m better than
that. So not the very back. Not yet. Three teenagers sit on two seats opposite
to avoid sitting next to me, people are cautious, it’s normal. A flustered lump
of a woman dumps herself down next to me, wrestling shopping bags to the floor,
her top riding up as she self-consciously tries to squeeze it over her
protesting bulges. She smells like awkwardness and chocolate wrappers hidden
from her husband. I smell like a dog rolling in a puddle and damp towels
that’ve been left on the floor. I rest my forehead on the windowpane, its moist
from condensation and it trickles to my eyebrow. I can see the bird-crap stain
on my left sleeve and I know other people can see it too. I don’t care. Let them
see.
The bulk of people get off at city centre.
Their loss. The lump gets up, staring at the floor. Her jeans are too small.
They were too small when her husband bought them four years ago. She wore them
to please him. The thread has given up the fight near her right knee, the
fabrics all puckered and dejected. She has to hold on the bar tight as the bus
swerves, she’s like one of them pins on a bowling alley ready to topple. I can
see the wedding band distorting as her knuckle clenches the rail, her fingers
all pink and white and pink and white like lard riddled marble. So quiet now
they’ve gone. This is my favourite part, not many stops now. Newgate, Byker,
Lemington. I would time it if I had a watch. But I do that thingy like a
nursery kid, one potato, two potato, three potato four. Muttering louder than
needs be so no one sits by me during the best part.
I’m craning my neck now, want the first
glance of it, ride the corner letting the bus throw my weight towards the
window. There it is, my beauty, my secret. The entire city laid out beneath me.
I’m on the precipice of a mountain and the lights are twinkling for me, only
me, they know I’m watching. My fingers shake, my ears pop from the sheer
ecstasy of it all. The engine shudders to a halt, terminations here already. My
own little galaxy, concentrated so hard on those little stars route its like
one of them time lapse photo’s that makes your eyes go all tricksy. © 2013 Rebecca ConwayReviews
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3 Reviews Added on January 25, 2013 Last Updated on January 25, 2013 Tags: loneliness, journey, eyes, observe AuthorRebecca ConwaySheffield/Newcastle, Yorkshire, United KingdomAboutI am a third year student at Sheffield Hallam. Feel free to leave feedback on my work. Thank you for your time. http://1000words.org.uk/watchful-eyes/ more..Writing
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