Thoughtless

What should I write upon?

When I'm filled with feelings so numb.

With the successes I lost, and the failures I won,

I sit quiet, but I'm not dumb

 

Letting the butterflies of thoughts fly away,

I try with seeing beyond the window pane.

Lost their wings, with no words to say,

Fell to Earth, a flight in vain.

 

I don't panic, but I'm in pain

I feel the lack of creativity... But hold on!

A little crazy, but pretty sane,

And that's what I wrote upon.

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

Thoughtless. One very true emotions faced by every writer at one point of time or the other and yet the most debated, thought about and investigated subject at the same time! Very correct usage of personification and metaphors. Nice description. Nicely done :)
Good as a debut!

[Rajat Chandra]

Thank you so much :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is avery nice poem.Well written and honest.Greaat job:)

[Rajat Chandra]

Thank you so much :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:P

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Like most of ur song lyrics :)

[Rajat Chandra]

This is a poem. :) And thanks a ton. ;)
Though I'll surely post my song lyrics too. :)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Good .. well i know this is a poem

[Anmol Ratnam]

Too short. Make it loooooonger. :/