Consequences of love

I hope you like it, its about the consequences of love...

In a bitter world of love
Euphoric we'll never have
Flooded with dark emotion
Never to find devotion

In terms of trusting
Somber thoughts will be showing
Slowly pain will rule
And tears will sluggishly roll

To be lonely and restless
In the empty world of darkness
Soon tearing every part
Of the selfless lonely heart

But to see the light
All has to fight
Remember in the field of loving
Simply means heart will be risking

Author's Note

Please comment for the grammatical errors, i hope you like it, and if you didn't I'm sorry I'm just a beginner, this is the first time i made a PLAY ON WORDS =)

Reviews

[Lavery the Librettist]

Thank u for ur submission :) a very gd first attempt :)