Butterflies Wings

A delicate description of the magnificent Butterflies :)

Have you ever heard a Butterflies wings flutter?

A Butterflies wings are you delicate.

They fly softly, but with passion.

A Butterfly goes with a purpose.

They have a heart, even if it's small.

A Butterfly is brave.

They have much to fear, but none the less keep flying.

A Butterflies wings are so quiet and graceful.

They have a hushed sound,

...Have you ever heard a Butterflies wings flutter?

Reviews

[Hiddenfire]

Something about those tiny yet beautiful creatures seems to make them an endless supply of good poetry. I think you portrayed the beauty they have not only in your words but also in the picture, (I'm assuming it's the one you chose for the avatar for this piece) gives it that extra story and feel to it.
The second line could use a little editing, either remove the word 'you' making it: "A butterflies wings are delicate." Or the word 'a' and make butterflies butterfly and change the period to a question mark making it: "Butterfly wings are you delicate?"
Other than that it all works nicely and flows together well.

[Marie]

Well, I'd love to see your picture--but you've painted it well with words. Great concept--hearing a butterfly's wings flutter...