I love you more

Love poem

I love you more than every star that ever was or will be.

I love you more than every grain of sand by the sea.

I love you more than every single breath I ever take.

I love you more than every single glance I ever make.

I love you more than the highest height a kite could

     fly

I love you more than all of the blinks of an eye

I love you more than I ever imagined I would

I love you more than I ever dreamed I should

I would never change you, even if I could.

Author's Note

I wrote this a while ago, but I thought I might put it up and see what people think :)

Reviews

[Hiddenfire]

fave line: "I love you more than all of the blinks of an eye" the phrasing was new and it was the one that out of all of them made me pause and picture something fresh I'd never even considered or had an image of before. The whole thing was well written and I'm glad you posted it.

[Katerine]

Simple and sweet. I love the last line.