Freefall

I had a vision of inner peace,
of the eternal spirit which lies underneath,
as my eyes beheld this tranquil masterpiece,
the pain began to release.

It was like the coming of a once forgotten friend,
or the scent of roses carried on a strong east wind,
a tear in the fabric of space as time slowly bends,
culminating into everlasting beauty again.

I felt something like serenity,
which ensnared my heart so very blatantly,
replacing the fear I held onto desperately,
with a simple moment of clarity.

It was in this moment, that I finally saw you,
your reflection clearly visible in waters deep blue,
the sun rising through a faint Crimson hue,
has the power to make it all seem true.

My forever, my undying, my absolute,
I can hear your voice even when all sound is mute,
my heart now attuned, my senses acute,
so this is how it feels to free fall with no parachute...

Reviews

[Eleise Trenda]

Very well done!! It was very lighthearted but striking. I like the somewhat different tones you threw in there. 👏🏽👏🏽
ALSO feel free to go and review my poem! Thanks

[Terry O'Leary]

You write lightly, but with gravity... well done!