rapunzel

it was rapunzels finest hour

being released from her ivory tower

her long blonde hair

now short and black

a drug to her love

similar to crack

the witch you see

had imprisoned her

not in a cage

i must concur

but with walls abound

too hard to break

his iron chains

of hate he made

the witch indeed  

a male you cry

this cant be true

did the fairytale lie

a grims a grim

i must reply

this is my story

the witch is a guy

the hero 

she did come along

no white horses

or sword so strong

breaking down 

the ivory tower

giving rapunzel 

strength and power

to stand up to be strong again

to learn the broken still can mend

Reviews

[Ruth]

Stunning finale to this...its good to read you honey :)
Poignant message xoxo

[Holly Mason]

I like the way this reads and flows much
constant images are offered
content is very interesting
thank you so much for sharing

[marie m gale]

thankyou so much for your kind words x

[Larry Dyson]

cool,a faierie tale.. I like..Laury

[marie m gale]

thankyou hunni x

[Larry Dyson]

yw