Too soon

Too soon

A Poem by Glee

We’ve been seeing each other for three months now

You say you deeply care and I truly believe you

I can see through your eyes and know that you are sincere and true

I have changed your life and made you a better person

I’m glad to make you want to live again

We’ve shared the best moments of our lives together

And I’m truly thankful for a great time last night

So now you ask me for my hand in marriage

 

Oh no

It’s too soon!

This

Us

This is not working

We can’t see each other anymore

Please leave now

 

These sorts of things don’t happen to me

This type of love doesn’t happen to people like me

It’s too perfect to be real

 

It’s got nothing to do with you

It’s me

Leave now

If you truly care you will respect my wishes

 

People like me don’t get too close to someone

It’s because we always end up getting hurt

I’ve been hurt before and it won’t happen again

I can’t afford to go through that pain again

If you truly love me, you will respect my wishes

 

Please leave and don’t come back

© 2009 Glee


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Bravo for not risking things too quickly.. the days of getting married after 3 months are pretty much long gone within today's economy and winds of change. With divorce rates soaring throughout the last few years I can highly understand your resistance. ALTHOUGH.. your divine relationship.. your lover maybe just a little trigger happy.. should you really discard them altogether for being sooo drawn into the core of your being? There must be much more than just outside beauty to trigger such a proposal.. if you are young and not ready then take your time.. meet others by all means.

I loved the flow and depth.. have related once or twice to what you feel here.. marriage is the HIGHEST honour in life today.. though many do not honour their vows or take this challenge seriously enough. If you still feel hurt by another.. cut this person loose maybe and find happiness with yourself first.. he deserves a whole and happy person just as you do! Beautifully portrayed... I am a lifelong runner in so many ways.. events that surround me created that for me.. don't let yourself become a runner forever! Bravo!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oh, Glee tha was sad, like really because the 'people like me' line and i get that fear so it makes me a little sad. this voice isn't totally yours, stinted flow and its very spoken to rhythum or back beat behind it. But mainly if just makes me a little sad for writers souls.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on October 22, 2009

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