Pretty Boy

 

They were young

They were youthful

They were so in love

 

She was pretty

He was lonely

 

She was lovely

He was charmed

 

Small, curvy waist

Smooth, beautiful legs

Classy hairstyle

Pretty smile

 

He had a thing for her

He had his eye on her

 

He drove her in his limousine

He took her out to dates

He took her out to dinner

He brought her pretty roses

He played her lovely music

 

He saw true love in her eyes

She saw an opportunity

 

She told him she loved him

She made him believe she felt the same way

 

She told him she would never leave him

She said she belonged only to him

 

And all the while he believed her

He would wait a while to lay with her

 

Because he was such an innocent boy

He had done no one any harm

 

He was such a pretty boy

He meant no one any harm

 

But fortune had a better way

 

A family fortune placed in a brother’s hands

Turned her eye the other way

 

Pretty boy’s looks faded away

For he was not so pretty anymore

He was broke

 

But the young lad was still in love

She wasn’t anymore

 

He goes to sleep, and she is the only one he thinks about

He goes to eat and she is the only one he’s thinking about

 

He can not sleep

He can not eat

He can not work

He can not function

 

For she is the only one he thinks about

Because she was so pretty

 

He must have her

Surely he must have her now

 

Because she was so pretty

 

Peeks into her private quarter

Can’t help but keep his eyes on her curvy waist

 

Sneaks into her private shower room

Can’t help but keep his hands off her smooth skin

 

Poor boy can’t help himself

But its just that she was so pretty

 

He had to have her

How could he help it now

 

She notices him at the corner of her eye

Wide eyed

Ice cold

Horrified

 

Screams out loud for him to go away

 

For she loved him not so anymore

She felt for him not so much anymore

She was in love with his elder brother

 

He was puss

Scum

Good for nothing

A nag of a man

And not man enough for her anymore

 

For she loved him not so much anymore

She felt for him not so much anymore

She was in love with his elder brother

 

But he was such a nice boy

He was a good boy

Who did no one any harm

And meant to do no one any wrong

 

Slapped him fiercely across the face

Hit her hard on the head

 

Dragged her down to the ban

Where nobody was listening

There was no one watching

 

Screams out loud

But there was not a person in sight

 

Cries aloud in despair

But there was not a soul in sight

 

You want a real man?

Let me show you what a real man feels like

 

She put up a fight

But he was too fast for her

 

She put up a struggle

But he was too strong for her

 

Now lying bear on the ground

Clothes torn to shreds

Bleeding down the drain

 

Brothers torn apart

Families turned to ruins

Innocence turned to evil

Comfort turned to pain

Love turned to hate

Happiness turned to despair

 

I always knew it would happen

I always said it might happen

Nobody listened

Reviews

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That's such a nice story
I enjoyed it a lot
Well done!

[Tenten]

ow, this story hurts me i enjoyed the style though and the switch of emotions and how it all played out the good to bad and the deciever to the victim. wow.

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moved me to tears... i feel in love with this piece.. awesome flow..and so much between the lines,... so much left to perception..yet every detail specified.... why do they lie about love.. how can people cheat people who love em... innocence.. a virtue that leads to doom... a beautiful write... am ur fan... :)

take care and keep smiling...:)
niki:)