Affectionate

A stunning beauty

An innocent smile

A magnificent glee

 

Oh baby,

Your infectious smile

Lights up the gloom inside

Brightening up the room

Whirling the flowers to bloom

While all it took was to groom

 

Hurting?

A show of affection is all you’ll need

To make everything better

And make all the pain go away

 

Baby, you’re back again

Now look at you!

While you’re around

Everything gets so affectionate

Can’t help but be so compassionate

How could this feel so appropriate!

Can’t believe we could be so fortunate!

 

Baby, you’re gone

But when you’re around

Smiles and laughter start to unfold

Your tender voice

Rings up the bells inside

 

Ding Dong Ding Dong

 

Everything gets so affectionate

Can’t help but be so compassionate

How could this feel so appropriate!

Can’t believe we could be so fortunate!

 

Putting your trust in me

Unraveling all your secrets

As you unravel mine

 

Can’t help but release all the confessions

And all it took was a little communication

All set in conversation

Loving without condition

 

Baby, when you’re around

Your infectious smile

Lights up the gloom inside

Brightening up the room

Whirling the flowers to bloom

While all it took was to groom

 

Baby, you’re gone

But when you’re around

Everything gets so affectionate

Can’t help but be so compassionate

How could this feel so appropriate!

Can’t believe we could be so fortunate!

 

Doing anything for me

Doing anything for you

 

Being close to you is more than I could ask for

 

For what is mine is yours

And what is yours is mine

 

For you were

A friend

A listener

A companion

A partner

 

If only I could reach out

Touch you

Feel you

Love you

 

But no!

Would that not ruin everything?

The innocence of our friendship

The sanctity of our partnership

 

Oh no!

Being close to you is more than I could ask for

Knowing you is more than I could want

 

And when the nights turn cold

The days get hot

The roads get rough

The going gets tough

And the world turns blue

 

Just promise me

That you will be there for me

As I will be for you

 

Reviews

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautifully written. You could make this a song, it sounds lyrical. Great write.

[Rockebah]

Beautiful beautiful beautiful.
I think this was wonderfully written.

[Steffi]

Very lyrical. it flowed so splendidly.
Very good write
"Oh baby,
Your infectious smile
Lights up the gloom inside
Brightening up the room
Whirling the flowers to bloom
While all it took was to groom"

[TL Boehm]

there are beautiful lonely lyrical moments in this one - it reads very much like a song. Nicely done.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Very nicely written poem, almost like a song. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i think that this is a very beautiful piece of writing... nicely done

[DeAn]

This is a great ballad I think and it is sure to win a ladies heart, as I see it has won their approval. :)

great job.

-DeAn

[Angel's Lady]

Very beautifully written. You definitely have the heart of a poet beating inside of you. Great job!

[Hot-N-Cold_17]

Wow that had so much emotion I think you did an amazing job it was really good I hope you keep writing stuff like.

[LacyBug]

I really liked this! It shows so much love and feelings! I would totally read this again! Thanks 4 sharing! Keep up the good work!

Lacy :)