Tribute to John Lennon !!

John Lennon has a beautiful song "Imagine"..I just reused the flow and wrote similar emotions..!!

imagine there is no luck

its not very hard to do….

ev1 gets, what he sweats

no envy comes to you…

You may say Im a dreamer..

but im not the only one

I hope someday you ll join me..

and fear would be for none

imagine there is no silence

Im sure you can, if you try…

noone did anythin to hide

nothing to worry, and nothing to cry…

You may say Im a dreamer..

but im not the only one

I hope someday you ll join me..

and there wud be no murk to shun…….

Author's Note

Intention is not plagiarism, its a tribute to a beautiful song in its own way. There are new thoughts, reused words, reused flow.

Reviews

[AllyKinzz:)]

I enjoyed the song like rhythem, however, you do need to go back and correct your spelling. A poem is not a poem unless the words were intentionally spelt incorrectly, then that makes it a song along the lines of pop genre.

[Prateek]

thank you for your review :)..
everything {spelling or shorthand writing} in above was intentional...im not aware of the strict demarcations between a poem or song..but what im sure is i would want to stick to those short forms..eg: i'd prefer 'you ll' rather than 'you will'...i feel it just keeps the pronounciation restricted and limited..and hence appears nice.. :)
thanks for your suggestion..

[AllyKinzz:)]

oh , ok i see i wasnt sure if the short spelling was intentional or not. i apologies if i seemed rude.

[Prateek]

oh not at all.. :)
Suggestions can only help.. :)
Thanks for your comments..:)

[AllyKinzz:)]

:)