My faith could never be better

My faith could never be better

A Story by D Hughes
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A grandmother who enjoys telling god her day. During the bad days and good days, she will always tell him everything and i mean everything. Enjoy

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Hey God!  It’s me, your favorite honor student, P.S. did you miss me. Well anyways I prayed for the Jones like you ask. I just wish you were there to see my prayers come true and I'm so happy, but Goodnight god and watch over me till day break once again.


Hey good morning God! Did you sleep well, because I did? Why you ask? Well  I dream of me being there for my grandson 36 birth day and playing bingo with old friends, that's why super old man.  Well I’ll be back to talk to you after I see something amazing today.  


God O God, I’m back and I was wondering have you seen my grandson take his first few steps this afternoon, it was beautiful. Well, he keeps falling at first, but in the end of the day he became a big walking boy.


P.S. Thank you for waking me up today.


Its about that time again, where i count sheep's and dream big dreams. So goodnight lord. O yea, I forgot to ask! Will you be there for my grandson baptism this weekend; I heard Jesus will be the special guest of honor . Of course you will, now I can tell the O’Neal’s, Hughes, Williams, Buford’s and the Thompsons the big man upstairs will be my guest of holly honor. Well it's getting too late and I feel...............................


  O my, I'm sorry for falling asleep on you last night. Will you ever forgive? Wait you already did; furthermore you want me to do what? God I think that's too much, but I will donate gifts and food for those who need it within 12 hours. So you just watch super granny save those family day.      

© 2010 D Hughes


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I love the idea that she is writing to God, but other than that the story falls dead and it was boring. So maybe you could make what she says to God more clear! That would make it a lot better! :) I hope I could help you out a little! Great Ideas though!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I like how cheering and jolly this Granny is. This entire story just made me smile. My only issue was figuring out when the next prayer began... maybe you could make new paragraphs, or mess with the centering of the text? Just a thought. Otherwise I really enjoyed it. [=

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the idea that she is writing to God, but other than that the story falls dead and it was boring. So maybe you could make what she says to God more clear! That would make it a lot better! :) I hope I could help you out a little! Great Ideas though!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 29, 2009
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D Hughes
D Hughes

Detroit, MI



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I'm a person who enjoy expressing his thoughts, while listening to beautiful music. I also have a talent that i feel can be perfected; therefore, if i spend more time in a writer environment then may.. more..

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