Breakeven lyrics: girl's point of view

Breakeven lyrics: girl's point of view

A Poem by Rosalyn Marie
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So I love the song Breakeven by The Script, and I thought it would be cool to change the lyrics to the girl's point of view :) These lyrics belong to The Script. this was just for fun :)

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He’s still alive but he’s barely breathing
Just prayed to a God that he don't believe in
'Cause he got time while I got freedom
'Cause when a heart breaks, no it don't breakeven

My best days will be some of his worst
I finally met a man that's gonna put me first
While he’s wide awake I’ve no trouble sleeping
'Cause when a heart breaks, no it don't breakeven, even, no

What am I suppose to do
When the best part of me was always you and
What am I suppose to say
When I'm all choked up and you're okay

I'm falling to pieces, yeah
I'm falling to pieces

They say bad things happen for a reason
But no wise words gonna stop the bleeding
'Cause I’ve moved on while he’s still grieving
And when a heart breaks, no it don't breakeven, even, no

What am I gonna do
When the best part of me was always you
And what am I suppose to say
When I'm all choked up and you're okay

I'm falling to pieces, yeah
I'm falling to pieces, yeah
I'm falling to pieces
(One's still in love while the other one's leaving)
I'm falling to pieces
('Cause when a heart breaks, no it don't breakeven)

I got his heart and your heart and none of the pain
I took my suitcase, he took the blame
Now he’s tryna make sense of what little remains, oh
'Cause I left him with no love and no love to his name

He’s still alive but he’s barely breathing
Just prayed to a God that he don't believe in
'Cause he got time while I got freedom
'Cause when a heart breaks, no it don't break
No it don't break, no it don't breakeven, no

What am I gonna do
When the best part of me was always you
And what am I supposed to say
When I'm all choked up and you're okay

I'm falling to pieces, yeah
I'm falling to pieces, yeah
I'm falling to pieces
(One's still in love while the other one's leaving)
I'm falling to pieces
('Cause when a heart breaks, no it don't breakeven)

Oh, it don't breakeven, no
Oh, it don't breakeven, no
Oh, it don't breakeven, no

© 2010 Rosalyn Marie


Author's Note

Rosalyn Marie
i kept the chorus part the same because i wanted to show that the girl is feeling those emotions too. :D so do you like it?

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when i hear the song thats how i sing it :) maybe ill like record myself and post it if i can lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is cool:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Luhvit

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