Sun

Sun

A Poem by Rosalyn Marie
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A diamente about the sun.

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Sun

 

Sun

 

Bright, Yellow

 

Glowing, Shining, Flaming

 

Clouds, Daytime, Summer, Beach

 

Glittering, Glaring, Illuminating

 

Brilliant, Cheerful

 

Light

© 2010 Rosalyn Marie


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ya i meant it as glaringly bright, like you have to squint to look at it.. and i just couldn't find another word to fit.. i guess this is one of those times where you loose the ~ness of the poem because of guidelines...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Glaring has a bit too negative a connotation to be in this cheerful poem about the sun. Everyone perceives our world differently, but we can all agree on the joy that the sun brings.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 3, 2010
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