Can you Imagine?

Another poem written for my poetry book...

Can You Imagine?

 

Can you imagine

 

A world without music,

Endless knowledge but no reason to use it.

 

A meadow without flowers,

Superman having no powers.

 

Or a forest without trees,

No black and yellow on bees.

 

An imagination-less childhood,

Nobody having a heart that’s good.

 

A war where no one has to die,

Or a flightless butterfly. 

Reviews

[eighwoeifj]

I like this(: this is random, but remember how i tried to find something to rhyme with 'feathers'? haha

Bikers without their leathers.

[Gianna Perry]

I like that you use both negative and positive things (a war without death = good, flightless butterfly = bad). It shows the good and bad in the world that we see. I don't know if that was your intent, to show good and bad, but it's what I see...I very much enjoy this.

[Alex Thomas]

I like the theme. It's everything that forms us and in some cases fills our world with wonder. It's a bit off rhythm in some spots, but I like it.