my love disclaimer

my love disclaimer

A Poem by rayon hawthorne

this package of love may contain as follows.. drained pockets, a deep concern for someone else insecurity, prone to be insecure yourself, holding the phone thinking you should call them but you know you cant cause you fucked someone else because they werent doing the job they were supposed to, and the fact that shes mad that you did that when she actually did the same, final side effect is realzing that some woman think they should always pitch but not catch. then you realize. love suck. take at your own risk. may cause cancer of the heart.

© 2009 rayon hawthorne


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lol quite bitter and vent-ish, for a lack of a better word, but I liked it none the less. I can agree with the line 'some women think they should always pitch but never catch.' There are a lot of those walking about and you only realize their tue color when its too late and the noose is tightly secured. I hope-if this was based upon true events- that it doesnt leave you bitter and doesn't leave you blinded, because unfortunately...the first step in knowing the good ones, is the very seem first step you take to discover the bad ones. Much luck in that department and please continue to let you emotions echo through each word.

London

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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lol quite bitter and vent-ish, for a lack of a better word, but I liked it none the less. I can agree with the line 'some women think they should always pitch but never catch.' There are a lot of those walking about and you only realize their tue color when its too late and the noose is tightly secured. I hope-if this was based upon true events- that it doesnt leave you bitter and doesn't leave you blinded, because unfortunately...the first step in knowing the good ones, is the very seem first step you take to discover the bad ones. Much luck in that department and please continue to let you emotions echo through each word.

London

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 21, 2009

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rayon hawthorne
rayon hawthorne

Columbus, OH



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