Why? The story of Laurie and Nadia - Scene one

Laurie and Nadia are best friends. Their teacher partners them for a writing homework assignment, but then Laurie keeps getting distracted. Read on for more...

SCENE ONE:

Nadia: I think that we should like, write a play for the writing homework.
Laurie: (groans) I'm tired of plays! We always do plays, Nadia! Can't we do a fantasy book or something?
Nadia: Well, I guess we can. We do do plays quite often.
(both - begin writing a fantasy book)
Laurie: You know what?
Nadia: What?
Laurie: I think that we should take a break, y'know, grab a snack like some cookies and apples juice, something like that.
Nadia: But, Laurie! We just began writing!
Laurie: I'm not getting any less hungrier.
Nadia: (rolls her eyes) Whatever. Let's go.
(both exit stage left)
(end of scene one)

Author's Note

Is scene one good so far? What do you think of the dialogue between Nadia and Laurie? Are the stage directions any good? Please ignore grammar issues.

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

I think this is going very well so far. The dialogue seems natural, appropriate, and well-paced.