It's Been Awhile

It's Been Awhile

A Poem by Break The Broken

It’s been a while since I’ve felt this way

It’s been awhile since I’ve heard someone say

I love you

And really mean it

 

It’s been awhile since I’ve been kissed

It’s been a while since I’ve had a love like this

I love you

And I really mean it

 

It’s been a while

But better late than never

It’s been a while but

I want this to last forever

© 2011 Break The Broken


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this is a great start the urging to be love and finally gets. Usually in life we criticize everything whether it's late or early so you make a good point everyone tends to look pass that fact that some is late but it seem their still here. it's story but it held my interest very nice job! Keep up the great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This poem is really passionate...
It speaks so much love...Great piece!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good stuff. Cute and tender.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good. It is simply put, but shows vunerablity and emotion throughout the piece. I loved the way you wrote every single line. Fantastic job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh this was greatly penned...loved the repetition "it has been a while"...lays down your emotions perfectly...sweet ,innocent and reflects the crave within!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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^ I think a heart is the only way to trruly express how I feel about ths poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

=] I like this, its more positive than other pieces I've read of yours, lately. Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's cute
o 3o

Posted 12 Years Ago


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ohmygod. that was amazing. i just absolutely LOVED it, really, i did. it was heartfelt and relatable and short and sweet and ahh i loved it! *clicks to favourites*

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Break The Broken
Break The Broken

Cranston, RI



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