It's Been Awhile

It’s been a while since I’ve felt this way

It’s been awhile since I’ve heard someone say

I love you

And really mean it

 

It’s been awhile since I’ve been kissed

It’s been a while since I’ve had a love like this

I love you

And I really mean it

 

It’s been a while

But better late than never

It’s been a while but

I want this to last forever

Reviews

[André-J-Franklin]

this is a great start the urging to be love and finally gets. Usually in life we criticize everything whether it's late or early so you make a good point everyone tends to look pass that fact that some is late but it seem their still here. it's story but it held my interest very nice job! Keep up the great work.

[nevermindfan1991]

This was poem great, it had a lot of potential. It had a great, yet simple rhyme scheme, had a lot of feelings. But I wanted more, I felt this poem was too short! Still great job though! Keep writing!

[nunldon]

Wow, that's a really touching read.
Oh yeah, for sure, for sure. (love rules)
Very heartwarming.
Terrific.
:D

[bobby]

Good Good job. Well framed and balanced. It flowed as if streaming from your heart.

[ApocalypticChick]

Wow this is really good! I like it! This is true for quite a few people. I know it applies to me personally! I like that it can apply to someone's life personally

[paparapapa]

Really touching. And the feelings of contentment and happiness just shine through. It's simple but you managed to make it striking leaving readers like me in awe. Very beautiful piece. Thanks for sharing. :)

[EMF]

I love it. Sheer unadulterated optimism and joy. I seem to be hitting lucky today in reading both quality and optimism. and this is a diamond. Great flow and structure with a marvelous theme. Thank you for brightening my day

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Beatiful!

[Overwhelming Confabulat..]

Nice piece. The flow was consistent up until the last line in my opinion, "I want this to last forever," but other than that its short, sweet and to the point. Enjoyable to read over all. Keep it up.

[JRB]

Love is sweet and needed, nice write