Love is Pain

Love is Pain

A Poem by Break The Broken

I told you how I felt

How you make my heart swell

But your smile makes me melt

But do you feel the sparks as well

 

I told you what you mean to be

What I hope someday we will be

How I want us to be together for an eternity

But do you feel the same way about me

 

I told you how I want to be more than friends

How I want this feeling to never end

How I want you to kiss me forever, again and again

But do you want me to be your girlfriend?

 

No.

Oh…

Love is pain in its most sinful disguise!

© 2011 Break The Broken


Author's Note

Break The Broken
This is what i get for telling him how i feel. i hate life. i hate everything. fuck off. im going to go cut now. bye!

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Rejection sucks. It's something many of us are familiar with. You captured the emotion involved with it perfectly. I love the last line, it's sad that it's so true. I'm sorry you had to deal with this, but f**k him. He doesn't deserve the real you.

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loved it

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Break The Broken
Break The Broken

Cranston, RI



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I've had my hard times, like everyone else. but i choce to make the best f everyday, when of course I'm not hating the world! XD my names Nadia and i love sports, i play basketball, soccer, and run t.. more..

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