Flying Forever

Flying Forever

Bird of a feather flock together

Soaring through the sky, flying forever

Never leaving not one soul behind

Flying like a machine, of the perfect design

All in line to form a ‘V’

Altogether, but still perfectly free

Flying over building, past clouds, through trees

From North to South, searching for their destiny

Birds of a feather, eternally together

Soaring through the sky, flying forever

Reviews

[EMF]

A truly beautiful piece. Simple and straightforward. Handled with grace and precission. You have also managed to show a form of perfection with the concept of freedom in unity. A superb theme and a terrific write. I throughly enjoyed every line. Many thanks for posting it

[nunldon]

Very lovely imagery and ideas.
Very peaceful, without worries.
How would it be?
Not alone, yet free.
Wonderfull. :D

[Leave me alone....]

awesome! this is amazing. it remind me of Maximum Ride and the flock. great poem :)

[Bridget Murphy]

It's so calming I almost cried!

[Thea]

Aw, I like the ending...
Amazing rhyme scheme and flow here...
Beautiful piece...Very thought-provoking...
:)))

[paparapapa]

"Souring" to "Soaring." But other than that, this is a really beautiful poem. I loved the fact that you made a poem about something that we admire but yet we tend to overlook. I loved how you described a simple thing and made it more beautiful with just a few words. Good job on this one.

[Keeley]

One word. Lovely.

[Break The Broken]

thanks guys!

[Ubiquitous]

Wow, a beautiful piece, truly shows the unity of the graceful creature's flight. The flow is flawless, well done!

[Pi Cee]

This is beautiful. Great job