Can't Be Healed By Time

Can’t Be Healed By Time

I trusted my heart out towards you

You laughed in my face

What was I to do?

But run, run away from you laugh

Hid in the corner

While you ripped my heart in half

I lie there with no heart beat

Wallowing in my own self-pity

I should have known this would happen

I should have been ready to defend

Myself

I should have never put my heart on the line

Now this wound can’t even be healed by time

Reviews

[paparapapa]

It really hurts when we give someone our whole heart, but they don't take care of it and instead just break it to pieces as if it was nothing precious. Then we start to think that we'll forever be hurt and forever be broken. However, I still believe that it'll pass in time, and there'll come a day when the right person will pick up the pieces and mend the broken heart. Anyway, this is really a beautiful poem, and I know a lot of people can relate to this. It also a smooth flow to it. Great job.

[The Girl with the smile]

I like this poem a lot! There is soo much emotion and heartbreak in every line. I've definitely felt this way before. You are a great writer!

[BeautyFromPain]

story of my lifee dude. Great poem

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I saw tractor trailers arriving with loads of concrete blocks.....construction workers with heavy equipment all hustling and bustling...and a young lady with a hard hat and a clipboard walking around directing the operation. They're building a huge wall. This story was the flashback that explained it all.

Excellent imagery and rich in emotion. Great poetry puts the imagination to work in a non linear way.

[Break The Broken]

RATES!!! pretty pretty please C;