Black My Eyes

Black My Eyes

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

I'm done with this s**t

Say goodbye

Throw a fit

Make me cry

Pick up the broken pieces

Of my life

Crawl across the floor

Begging you to hit me

Just once more

Life was good

But I can’t for hell

Hopefully I’ll fall under the devils spell

Cut me once

Burn me twice

Is it sad?

That it brings me delight?

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

Pick up the broken pieces of my life

 

Forget my sorrow

I promise I’ll be dead by tomorrow

So many ways to die

It’s hard to choose

Bleed out, free fall, or the old fashion nus

Ill cry myself to sleep

And dream of tomorrow

When I fall to my death

And surrender my sorrow

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

This is my final goodbye

 

Hit me again

Because I love the pain

Push me off this building

So I have someone to blame

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

I'm finally going to die

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

Death will take me for a ride

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

It’s time to say goodbye

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

Cut my wrist

And black my eyes

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

Isn't it odd how Pain becomes that most trusted friend when all other friends lose trust? I think it's all about what we learn to depend upon. I am always impressed with a poem that can express anger while keeping a perfect flow and meter. It is a perfect example of the power of writing --and most importantly the power of the writer. :)

[paparapapa]

I liked the flow of this poem, but the message is kind of disturbing for me. Haha. Maybe I'm just not used to it. But still, amazing poem from you. Good job. ;)

[Nihilum]

I really really like it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Some wild and crazy visions create by your poem. Each line adding to the pain and desire of this poem. I like the pace and the strength of the lines. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Bridget Murphy]

Fantastic!!! This was Amazing, the ryming pattern was perfect, and it flowed perfectly,I realy loved this piece, realy great it truly flowed realy well.
Again this was an amazing poem!!!:)