Black My Eyes

Black My Eyes

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

I'm done with this s**t

Say goodbye

Throw a fit

Make me cry

Pick up the broken pieces

Of my life

Crawl across the floor

Begging you to hit me

Just once more

Life was good

But I can’t for hell

Hopefully I’ll fall under the devils spell

Cut me once

Burn me twice

Is it sad?

That it brings me delight?

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

Pick up the broken pieces of my life

 

Forget my sorrow

I promise I’ll be dead by tomorrow

So many ways to die

It’s hard to choose

Bleed out, free fall, or the old fashion nus

Ill cry myself to sleep

And dream of tomorrow

When I fall to my death

And surrender my sorrow

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

This is my final goodbye

 

Hit me again

Because I love the pain

Push me off this building

So I have someone to blame

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

I'm finally going to die

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

Death will take me for a ride

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

It’s time to say goodbye

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

Cut my wrist

And black my eyes

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

Isn't it odd how Pain becomes that most trusted friend when all other friends lose trust? I think it's all about what we learn to depend upon. I am always impressed with a poem that can express anger while keeping a perfect flow and meter. It is a perfect example of the power of writing --and most importantly the power of the writer. :)

[Keeley]

Not much into despair poetry, but a graceful flow and the concept adds a grungy appeal. Job well done.

[Stripes]

Holy... wow. This is fantastic. It flows beautifully and the wording is amazing. Beautifully intense.

[Sophie]

So beautiful, in a sad way. I know so many people who could relate to this.

[Leon R]

Painful but so real. Very good poem. You have a talent for expressing pain in the way it could be felt behind the words.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Wow...intense and powerful. The emotions that emanate from this poem are amazing. Great write!

[nunldon]

Hi Break The Broken, I like this one's honesty.
Sounds like a song (with the repetition): very effective technique. It definately has a rhythm and feel to it. Pain often relieves feelings of guilt but only temporarily, therefore, the need to do it again and again, takes place. One learns to break the cycle by forgiving one's self. ;D

[Leave me alone....]

Amazing! :) You're an amazingly awesome poet Nadia!

[emma]

very powerful. amazing, too:) loved it!

[Thea]

Aw...That was so powerful! XD
I must admit that this was really written perfectly...I just love how the emotions here expressed everything so well...
Great piece...
:)))