Black My Eyes

Black My Eyes

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

I'm done with this s**t

Say goodbye

Throw a fit

Make me cry

Pick up the broken pieces

Of my life

Crawl across the floor

Begging you to hit me

Just once more

Life was good

But I can’t for hell

Hopefully I’ll fall under the devils spell

Cut me once

Burn me twice

Is it sad?

That it brings me delight?

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

Pick up the broken pieces of my life

 

Forget my sorrow

I promise I’ll be dead by tomorrow

So many ways to die

It’s hard to choose

Bleed out, free fall, or the old fashion nus

Ill cry myself to sleep

And dream of tomorrow

When I fall to my death

And surrender my sorrow

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

This is my final goodbye

 

Hit me again

Because I love the pain

Push me off this building

So I have someone to blame

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

I'm finally going to die

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

Death will take me for a ride

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

It’s time to say goodbye

 

Cut my wrist

Black my eyes

Cut my wrist

And black my eyes

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

Isn't it odd how Pain becomes that most trusted friend when all other friends lose trust? I think it's all about what we learn to depend upon. I am always impressed with a poem that can express anger while keeping a perfect flow and meter. It is a perfect example of the power of writing --and most importantly the power of the writer. :)

[Adabelle Davis]

Did you mean noose for nus?
It's brilliant! Depressing, but brilliant.

[Linzey]

I like the power in this poem. The cut my wrist and black my eyes reminds me of hawthorne heights because that's what they talk about in their song ohio is for lovers.

[Pi Cee]

You have so much power with the trail of words. The direction of that power is guided with the feelings you feel while using them, this is sad, frankly. That you have to feel this with these words. that you had inspiration enough to write this. It's good, the flow the structure, its all good. But its sad. Depressing, not that I don't know depression well. You are extremely vivid with this, and I even almost see red with the feeling it conveys. Good write, but be careful. And stay safe enough to keep writing for us.

[NicoRide]

I love this poem!

Cut my wrists,
Black my eyes,
Emo love,
Until I die!!

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is a very deep, moving at the same time harrowing to read. You have conveyed and expressed such emotions with such imagery.

"Hit me again
Cause I love the pain"

The two lines speak volumes... a beaten down soul, mercilessly fighting back till the very end, not giving in no matter how much pain their in.

A fantastic piece.. Excellent

[Forgotten]

wow

[VelvetKissesXo]

I loved it...this was written perfectly...the more readers can relate, the better. Amazing.

[BeautyFromPain]

Niceee!

[flypaper]

A little depressing for me personally, but I thought the 'black my eyes' title and phrase in place something like 'give me a black eye' was interesting and gave the piece a unique flavor.