One Day

One Day

Her perfectly pumped lips

Would fit perfect with mine

She’s like my drug, my fix

A high that will last for all time

One day I’ll tell her

My words will come out like silk

One day I’ll hold her

My arms will wrap around her body so beautifully built

One day well be together

Our true love will out shine the sun forever

One day

On day

Reviews

[Break The Broken]

yeah i mean plumped, sorry.

[WhiteRabbit]

This is a very balanced piece, smooth and terse, yet provides very good images.

I'm not sure about 'pumped' lips, I think you may have meant plumped.

[nunldon]

The intimacy here is fantastic and compelling. Very enjoyable (with hope). ;D

[Nihilum]

Very emotional and beautiful :3

[Thea]

This was full of feelings...I can sense the devotion and passion you have for that particular person...Great piece...
:)))

[kjsa]

This is great and shows a lot of emotion.

[Vertigoingnowhere]

this is awesome good job!

[emma]

very emotional. i loved it! and decriptive, too.