Sitting Over There

Sitting Over There

You just sitting over there

Do you even notice me here?

How can I pay attention in class?

When my hearts beating so fast

When you ask for a pencil

My heart dances a little

I know it sounds stupid

But when you asked for my notes

I felt like I was hit by cupid

I try not to stare

But your simply sitting over there

Just sitting over there

 

Reviews

[Forgotten]

i love it :)

[Bridget Murphy]

I realy like this, knowing the person you like is just sitting next to you and you can't help but stare. This was a very pretty poem!!!!:)

[Thea]

Aw, I love this a lot! Made me smile! Haha! :)))
Very sweet and lovely! That feeling when he talks to you all of a sudden! As if your heart is having a marathon...Haha!
Excellent work! :)))

[Leon R]

You have very nice rhythm here and it's easy for reading. The way you put down the feelings is awesome excellent.

[emma]

awesome;) very nice, i loved it. a cute piece and very easy to relate to.

[Ubiquitous]

Ahh, the butterflies... I can completely relate, especially so when you explained it so well! :) Very well written, the flow is magnificent. Keep writing! (As if you'd do otherwise...)

[kjsa]

I get that feeling in class too, and then I can't focus.

[Pi Cee]

Just over there.... The hardest place to get to, in my opinion at least.
Good structure, cute rhymes. Good write.