My Drug(why is it?)

My Drug(why is it?)

A Poem by robbie baby

He's like a drug;
whenever i look at him
i cant get enough of it
though i look away for a bit
i still have to think.....
why is it?
why is it that in my mind i say "hi"
but in reality i walk by?
i cant say i really like him,
'cause my mind isnt made up
but if i wait too long,
i might run out of luck
it worries me though.....
if i talk to him,
wil he like me............or will he hate me?
i cant lie about how i feel,
but are these feelings for real?

why is it?
i cant say

© 2009 robbie baby


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Take it from someone who neglected saying what needed to be said. I'm paying for it, take the leap and just work your way to it. It all starts with first saying hi. You can do it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Personally, I found this piece to be far too sophmoric for my tastes. There wasn't really a flow, just a "will he won't he" tone. With some major refining, this piece may become something, though I doubt it.

N. Strong

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 20, 2009

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