Adventuring Bride

Adventuring Bride

A Poem by Ravenwing
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Freestyling again...poem...but a little prose-ish, I think?

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Dark wings
Gothic beams
Mad, insane
Deep in the rain

Toxic 'love'
Dangerous 'dove'
Thrill in the air
Snake's dare

Intoxicating and pleasing, yes...but he led to ruin and decay, my heart was still empty.

Gray wings
Sunshine, he brings
Smart or artistic 
Yet even he, sadistic

Believer, but sinner
"Make me dinner!"
Selfish and forgiving
Liar, yet honest living 

Loving and adoring, yes...but he could not be perfect, my heart was still empty.

Myself with gray
Control, and I SAY! 
"Victim always!"
Yes, MY ways! 

Take what I desire
'Build an empire'
Repent of my mistakes
Yet pride awakes 

Invigorating and 'happy'...but I lacked respect and love, my heart was still empty. 

THEN!!!!

White aglow
Never saw His face
Wedding, laced 
My feet paced

His reach grasped
This heart of mine
His chivalry, sublime
His healing wine 

Strength, inexorable 
Truth, good rule
Wise and no fool
Deep, but not cruel 

Creator and Steward,  
Living love, He delivers
Refreshing rivers
My soul, indeed, shivers

Shivers at His great name and the salvation He brings...my heart is full, my heart You pull...oh dear Bridegroom, of You, heaven and earth sings...heaven and earth SINGS! 

© 2015 Ravenwing


Author's Note

Ravenwing
**The last 'character' is of course Jesus Christ (The 'white aglow, never saw His face' part/last section)**

'Audio Version' of the poem can be found on my blog --> Check out, comment on, and share my site please: http://prodigal-sharinglife.weebly.com/

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Added on November 3, 2015
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Tags: Christianity, God, Jesus, Christ, Love, Adventure, Life, Marriage

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Ravenwing
Ravenwing

Fort Wayne, IN



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