Cracking Onyx

Freestylin' a little (with a tiny edit)...It's been a while since I've written.

Black shell

Onyx cocoon

Cracking, cracking

With the Light of purity

Eagle's call

Lion's roar

Dove's song

Phoenix burns

My chains, rattling

The wolves, growling

Snakes, hissing

Desires, swarming

Holy fire, scorching

Holy water, healing

And the shell is cracking

My body shaking...

Fear struck, but I keep moving

Fell into the abyss, but I'm climbing

In the desert, but I'm crawling 

To the oasis of His glory... 

I'll never be full saint

My bones are still dry

But I gotta keep fighting

Even if I'm the last to arrive 

Reviews

[Scheherazade]

I like the way you present passionate and striking images in clear and concisely lyrical language. It was a pleasant read and I enjoyed it quite a bit.

[Ravenwing]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the review! :D

[Scheherazade]

You're very welcome.