Fated Winter: Part OneA Story by RavenwingInspired by Christmas, romantic love, and a song called Suzy Snowflake...I present to you a small story about some classical wintry characters, but with my own tiny twist. Enjoy:DSuzy Snowflake is always a clumsy
type of girl. Some say it is because her white dress is too long, always snapping
at her glass slippers. Others say she is just simply Suzy. Clumsiness, to Suzy,
was a curse....but fate would change that view of hers, for today, such
prophecy would be fulfilled. Once Suzy Snowflake was finished with her work
of crafting snowflakes for the next winter-day, she decided to take a walk
along the window panes of a small cottage. Amongst the chilled winds, she heard
a small and riotous whistle. The whistle belonged to the mouth of her distant
cousin, Jack Frost. Suzy chose not to bother chasing
after the whistle because of previous winter failures. These failures, she
remembered, consisted of being tricked by Jack’s cunning, worn out by Jack’s
agility, and/or of her tripping before she could grab a hold of his translucent
body. Yes, she definitely was not in the
mood. A trail of fallen snow follows Suzy’s
footsteps wherever she goes, including across the window panes. She was growing
into her fully-fledged age of eighteen and soon, she would become a goddess.
She would become forever youthful, like most supernatural creatures, designated
at the age Mother Nature willed it to be. “Oh-ahhhhhh!” Suzy was so deep in her thoughts
that she was oblivious to the patch of ice on the next window sill. She slipped
and fell off the edge. She tried maneuvering her hands to push a snow pile
beneath her, but her powers were not fully refined yet. She screamed. A cold
wind blew across her back. Suzy found herself in bluish white
hands of sprinkled ice dust. “Stumbling Suzy, you could have had
almost a doozy!” His laughing whistle echoed across
the sky. Jack Frost’s hair is snow white and glossy with edges of diamond ice.
His eyes are that of frost and twilight sky. Suzy’s cheeks went warm as can be
for a winter entity, whenever she looked at him. “Does Suzy speak? Hello?!? Why so mellow?” She snickered and wrapped her arms
around him tightly. “I finally caught you, Jack!” He laughed a whistle again with his
set of pearly-whites. “After all these years, I let you catch me and your heart is full
of glee!” Suzy wagged her finger in front of
him. “Nah-ah! You did not put my arms
around you! So it counts!” “Or it is canceled out by me catching you! You surely are clumsy,
Suzy-loo!” “Mischievous Jack Frost! You always
have a loophole, don’t you?! And a rhyme on your lips.” He winked. “I have to keep my record clean of
catches. And poetry can spark a heart’s fire like matches!” Suzy laughed. Suzy’s joyous sounds
are like a sweet, melodious tone that could make flowers grow if she was not a
winter entity. Whenever she laughed, the
outlines of her body would dimly glow with a white holy light. On this special
day, that holy light was at its brightest and Jack gave his rare gentle smile. “So, I heard you are becoming of
age, Miss Snow Sage?” Jack Frost received his immortality
at the age of twenty, about three earth years before Suzy was born. Once the
snow cried with her birth, he had a feeling that his future was going to
collide with hers in some way. However, he did not know what that was until the
present year when he felt the warm ‘slush’ spreading all across his icy heart. “Yes! I will finally become
immortal and receive my final status as a goddess of the snow!” She giggled. Goddess
of the snow, thought Jack Frost, and it was a nice thought. A ball of snow and ice splattered
across Jack’s face. “Hey wake up, Jack Frost! Don’t, in
the dream world, get lost!” Laughing, Suzy jumped out of his
hands and began to run. However, as usual, she tripped and skidded onto her
face. Jack Frost laughed and picked her up. He was not in the mood to be wild
and child-like, so he did not throw a ball of snow back at her. Suzy noticed
this with slight blankness in her white-encrusted, baby blue eyes. “Why are you so serious? I have
never seen this Jack Frost before. And that soft smile. Are you losing your
game?” His hands fumbled, sprinkling the ice
dust. He was nervous. He did not know what to say. He did not like the
vulnerability, but he could not help it. He realized in that moment that the ‘slush’
was there ever since Suzy was born, expanding slowly. “Or are you thinking about that
human girl you liked before? I thought you came to terms with that and she is
already married anyways. Why think about what is past?” “I-I...Suzy I..” She threw a snowflake back and
forth between her hands in flourishing arches. Maybe this would get Jack Frost to lighten up again, she thought...but
it did not work. She tried dancing around, twirling, surprisingly not tripping
or falling, and making goofy faces...still no regular Jack Frost. “Come on, cheer up, Jack! Look at
the snow! Do you like my work? Though I tripped, the ice looked gorgeous on
that window sill! Come on! You are not a mellow fellow! Past is past!” Suzy swiveled around him, smiling,
trying to cheer him up and make him forget whatever the problem was. Suzy is a
little bit naive. She is the ideal of beginning and good winter in all of its
purity and innocence. She only learned how playful, tricking, and sometimes
frustrating winter could be with Jack. “Bum! Bum bum bum! Buuuum! Bum
bum!” Suzy’s long, snow-white hair curled
around her body as she mimicked playing a drum. Jack’s limbs shook like chattering human teeth. Fear and
desire continued to grow in him. “Jack! Jack, wake up! Come on,
dance with me! Or let me chase you! Or let us make sculptures! Where is my
fearless Jack?” He clenched his fists with slight
anger and took a deep breath. “Come here, you little sprite of
light.” Suzy was about to turn to run in
play, but he was so fast that he caught her quickly. He pulled her close with
the strength and bonding of his arms. The scent of her fresh coldness perfumed
his nose. He could see the ice melting at the tips of his hair. “Why is your hair melting, Jack?
What are you do--?” His cold lips hastily went upon
hers. Suzy was shocked at first, but she did not refuse as her cheeks warmed
again. Her arms wrapped around the back of his neck. The cold drops of Jack’s ‘melting
hair’ oozed into their kiss. Mother Nature saw all of this from
her crystal globe and smiled. This was Suzy’s ultimate destiny: to be the wedded
companion of Jack Frost. Because though Jack Frost caused Mother Nature trouble
sometimes, she wanted him to be happy like any human mother would wish for her
son. However, another entity was watching with pure jealousy. The Snow Miser, bitter and greedy as he is, always wanted Suzy for himself, but Mother Nature consistently denied him. Within Snow Miser’s mind, a wicked plan had been brewed and was about to be implemented. END OF PART ONE © 2014 RavenwingAuthor's Note
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Added on December 10, 2014 Last Updated on December 10, 2014 Tags: Winter, Christmas, Love, Romance, Jack Frost, Snow Miser, Mother Nature, Mischief AuthorRavenwingFort Wayne, INAboutHello, I hope you enjoy my writing and I look forward to reading yours! I'll try to be on here when I can (some weeks, or even months, are really busy)! I welcome good constructive criticism because o.. more..Writing
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