First Love's Embrace

First Love's Embrace

A Poem by Ravenwing
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An old poem from the past. Not a haiku, but the flow of idea is kind of similar.

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Oh, love’s embrace

Like a golden lace

Beautifully sown

Sweet, like a musical tone

 

Gentle and soft

Like the wind on a loft

Bright and beautiful

Oh, I wish to drink full

 

Full of love’s tasty waters

Gently shaped like clay and his potters

Bright as a golden sun...

But once broken, it’s a shot of a gun 

© 2014 Ravenwing


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Added on December 9, 2014
Last Updated on December 9, 2014
Tags: Love, Embrace, Gun, Heartbreak

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Ravenwing
Ravenwing

Fort Wayne, IN



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