Chapter One (from the perspective of Adara)A Chapter by Ravenwing “Where are you going, Adara?” I felt my friend’s hand on my shoulder.
“Home,
Tina. I shouldn’t be here.” The
music pumped through the bar’s entrance door. Tina stood a little unbalanced;
she drank a lot when she had time to get out. Her long, red hair smelled of too
much perfume and her maroon lipstick was slightly smeared from making out with
‘the guy of the night’. “Oh,
come on, Addie! L-l-live a little!” My brown
hair swished in front of my granite eyes. “I
danced. That’s enough for me tonight. I am going home before it gets too late
and before my mind gets too fuzzy.” Tina
laughed hysterically. “You
are so-o funny!! All stern and stuf-f-f.” She
tripped and crashed into the front wall of the bar; my eyes drooped in
annoyance. “Come
on, Tina. Let us get you home before you kill yourself or cause trouble.” Dazed
and intoxicated, Tina hooked herself around my left shoulder and we stumbled
back to my old Honda. “Ca-can
we stop for some water? My throat is parcheddd--parchched...” Tina
crashed onto the leather set, with her eyelashes blinking and blinking. “I will
go get you some from the bar. Here are the keys to lock the doors and play some
music if you want.” Her
brown eyes began to shiver behind almost-closed eyelids. I sighed and turned
her head to the side, just in case of any puke. I took off one of my keys that
opened the door manually from the outside; it had a mini industrial gasmask
painted on it. I put the rest of the keys in Tina’s lap and I locked the car
doors manually from the inside. The bar is not too far… A long field of black
pavement with very dim lights lied between the bar and me. The parking lot was
piled high with tons of automobiles of all shapes and sizes. Midnight Red was a
very popular and local, rave bar. With
turning in 360 circles now and then, I quickly hastened to the entrance door. The
only people I saw was a Hippie-Emo couple making out in a truck. I entered
Midnight Red with industrial metal blasting into my ears. “I.D.
please.” Though
he saw me before, the bulky security guard checked my license again. He returned
my license, along with a gentle elbowing of me into the dance room. My mouth
blew out some air through my teeth in annoyance. Red lights spotted across the
wooden, rose-glazed floor of Midnight Red. Hidden black quarters and coaches
with red velvet canopies decorated the sides of the room. Circular stages of
strawberry carpet, steel cages, and stripper poles were filled with exotic
dancers; both male and female, most of them wore some sort of Gothic fetish
clothing. Individuals of all sorts, both Gothic fashion and other modern styles,
partied through the whole building: some making out, some having ‘clothes-on’
sex, some watching or whistling at strippers, some getting helplessly drunk, some
just ‘dancing the night away’, etc etc. “Care
for a drink?” A
Bat-cave dressed man stood before me with piercings dotting almost every inch
of his face. “No,
thank you. I will only be here briefly.” The man
shrugged and went to the next ‘free’ girl he could find. Another one-night-stand man…of course. I rolled my eyes as I
traveled to the second bar room in the back. Here, one sometimes could find at least a little silence from the noise, but
tonight loud drunkards broke that sweet silence. I casually leaned onto the
bar, signaling the surprisingly classy-looking bar-tender. “What
can I get ya, miss?” The
bar-tender gave a one-sided smile. My cheeks slightly burned. He was handsome,
the type to drink wine with in a French restaurant, but I was not surprised. “Just a
water to go please.” “Are
you the driver tonight?” “Yeah,
what of it?” The
bar-tender handed me a filled Styrofoam cup with a plastic lid. “Here
you go...just a little advice, miss, though you cannot drink, do not be afraid
to live a little tonight. It’s the weekend and life is short. Give in to some
wildness. There are other ways to satisfy the thrill of living...” He
looked me up and down slowly but quickly. I was wearing a black dress with neon
leggings. Everything was stylized with metallic accessories and glowing
threads, but very conservative. The outfit was definitely not a ‘chew-toy art’
for a man to indulge his visual senses on...which is clearly what this man was
looking for, some ‘revealing’ skin. Pervert. “Thanks,
but I got enough living life in Christ.” His
eyes popped open; one did not see many ‘authentic’ Christians around Midnight
Red and most especially, not a Christian who liked dressing in Gothic or
industrial fashions. I
walked away. “Hey, what is UP, Miss Sexy?” A black
guy in typical ‘I-am-trying-to-be-ghetto’ attire, backwards hat and all, moved
off from a wall. He started rapping some song and I just circled my eyes. I
mean, I was not from the ‘ghetto’ and all, but seriously, why would a dude
randomly rap like that to a stranger? To impress me? Ha! Good luck with that!
More like to estrange me, if anything! “Thanks
for the song, but goodnight.” I
pushed through him without hesitation. I so just want to get out of here. I shoved through the
ever-increasing dancing and thumping crowds, who were banging their heads at
times like rockers. One woman hit me in the shoulder, but kept on partying like
nothing ever happened, which just annoyed me more. After a couple more minutes,
I finally pulled out of Midnight Red with almost a gasping breath and a small
headache of peaked frustration. What happened to the lights? There is barely
any. I pulled my leather jacket
closer; it was the autumn season. I
cautiously began my journey across the black pavement. The making-out-Emo couple
and truck were gone. I was left alone with only inanimate objects around me. I
shivered; slight anxiety was added to the headache. I do not have my buttoned key to blink the
headlights. How am I supposed to find my car? What happened to the lights? I peered into the thick
darkness, searching for my silver Honda; the moon was clouded, yet still gave a
faint sliver of light to help me search. “Hello,
miss.” I smoothly
pulled out my lipstick tube, which was secretly a bottle of pepper spray, from
the front of my pants and into the pocket of my jacket without external notice;
for a second, I felt like a hardcore ninja. I swiveled to face sour breath,
stinking of beer and vodka. Two bulky, young men stood tall before me in dressy
Jock tees and blue jeans. A large, silver ring was worn around one of the men’s
forefingers, etched with some lady drunk upon a dragon. “Do you
know how beautiful you are, darlin’? T-This moonlight rightly il-luminates
every corner of your body.” The country
man with the silver ring took a step closer to me. “Thanks…?” This is not good. The man
smoothed his finger across one strand of my hair; my body began to quake a
little as my anxiety transitioned into fear. He smiled similar to the bar-tender, but this
man’s eyes were unusual...darker than the bar-tender’s and glowing with embers...a
predator’s eyes. A predator’s eyes... “So,
Beautiful, let me buy you a drink, eh?” I
almost coughed from the overpowering stench of his alcohol breath; I tried to
keep as much sternness and focus I could muster. “Thanks,
but no.” “Oh,
come on. Have a little fun.” He gripped
my shoulder. My nerves electrified, breaking my sternness. I put my ‘lipstick
tube’ to his eyes and quickly heeled his balls. “OWWW!
That w***e!” I ran
between two large cars until another man stopped me in my tracks. With his arms
reaching, I kicked him also in the nuts. Apparently, he had balls of steel as
he did not yelp; he bounded my arms and pulled me close into a tight grip. “Let me
go!” I
squirmed viciously and he covered my mouth. I fiercely bit into his clammy hand
and that time, he yelped. I struggled to get free until my eyes blurred from
all the stress. “Take
this, b***h!” The
country man sprayed the pepper spray into my eyes (I had dropped it in the run
and confusion). I bit my tongue with a muffled scream. I felt my face crash
into the asphalt. My head bulged in aching pressure and I curled up my knees
slightly in reaction. A bandanna went around my mouth and was hastily tied. Multiple
feet crammed into my stomach, making my guts pound. I felt blood trickle down the
side of my head as the country man smashed my face in with his filthy shoes.
One of the other men pulled my hand out and stepped on it, at the right angle
with the right force, breaking my wrist-bone. Tears crawled across my face, but
I could not fully scream. Help! Someone help! Why? Why?! This doesn’t
make sense! Are they that drunk? I need to get away! A searing pain, most likely some
sharp knife, struck through my right shoulder; my teeth clenched the fabric of
the bandanna fiercely. “T-that
is what you get, w***e! Enjoy hell!” I could
hear the sound of their laughs and shoes walking away as my ears nosily drummed.
Dizziness overcame me like a whirling carnival ride. I tried to lift onto my
non-injured hand, but my stomach clenched me into defeat, back onto the asphalt.
My shoulder burned with so much pain
that I could not describe it adequately enough. “H-help!” My
voice was almost inconceivable for the senses. I did not have the energy to
move the bandanna. My tongue tasted the iron of my blood. “H-HELP!” My neck
fell; I could no longer hold it up. I could not scream or yell anymore. I could
feel blood oozing all over my body. Am-am I to die? My thumping forehead wrinkled
in fear. I-I am not ready to die. I know w-what lies
ahead…but-but I am not ready! Please, not yet! “L-l-lord…” I
coughed, which caused my stomach and forehead to pulsate even more. A silence
ensued for a couple of minutes. I wanted to pray in full voice, but I was
weary….I was draining away... I am going to die...aren’t I? I opened my sticky eyelids
for a last glance at the moon; some tiny black dots were scattered across my
vision. H-huh…! I went cold, as cold as
someone can be with losing blood. To the side, a shadow loomed above me in a
large, hooded trench-coat. A fashioned cane stood beside the person. From what
I could see, the cane had a top of a large, silver skull with two crossed
reapers in the skull’s eyes. Reapers....Death... My eyes
closed again, but this time, automatically. I could not think or feel any more,
except for the feeling of hope. Hoping that this person was not really Death...but
a friend, instead of a foe. © 2014 RavenwingAuthor's Note
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Added on December 9, 2014 Last Updated on December 9, 2014 AuthorRavenwingFort Wayne, INAboutHello, I hope you enjoy my writing and I look forward to reading yours! I'll try to be on here when I can (some weeks, or even months, are really busy)! I welcome good constructive criticism because o.. more..Writing
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