Human

Human

A Poem by Raven's Fall

I am human
Because I can feel
And as oranges peel
I ask myself
Will I ever heal?

The orange is rotten
And I'm long forgotten

The question which detains
From the collection of remains

The question which is rotten
Am I human?
I've forgotten

© 2015 Raven's Fall


Author's Note

Raven's Fall
This was inspired by something I read, not sure what

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I enjoyed the journey in the poetry.
"The question which is rotten
Am I human?
I've forgotten"
The above question is asked by the all of us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


The question which is rotten
Am I human?
I've forgotten..


Symbolism is present , short and simple yet a poem worth it to be pondered upon ^_^.. thanks for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


made me think... very good rhyme scheme, and very thought-provoking imagery. good one!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 21, 2015
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Raven's Fall
Raven's Fall

St Albans, Hertfordshire, United Kingdom



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Hi Not entirely sure what to write Never been good at these things side note: my stories/poems tend to be a bit dark, I also hate using names, because I can never come up with good ones. more..

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