impossible dream

Another love poem. These seem to be something of a frequency as of late.

we dream

different dreams

same thoughts

yet our lips seem oceans apart

i wish that i could summon

them upon my request,

but that isn't

reasonable nor logical

you'd laugh at my folly, im sure;

but why shouldn't i dream

the impossible? even the word itself

declares 'i'm possible' as miss hepburn

so eloquently said,

and so i will not give up on us

even if we're an impossible dream

stained glass windows sometimes shatter

but they can be put back together again;

and so can we �"

so i'm putting away these lamentations

dragging out my prayers

to burst through all the bottles of vodka

my eyes have been eying 

in the shelves of walmart i'd rather be

kissed with sobriety

when i open my eyes again,

especially if it means the truth of being again

with you.

- linda m. crate  

Reviews

[Nkosana B Masuku]

wow wow wow this is emotional.great use of metaphor and a pleasurable read.great penning LindA

[linda m. crate]

Thank you, Nkosana. I really appreciate your kind words and your input. :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

You welcome.a good read deserves such

[krish]

what a great write once again, you've written it from your heart indeed. I liked this great poem, well written. you've a talent to write. keep writing.100/100.

[linda m. crate]

Thank you, Krishnan, for your continued support. I really appreciate your words, and I'm sincerely thankful that you can appreciate my work. Don't worry, I don't intend on stopping any time soon.