Black hole

Tread carefully as you wander
The road to my heart is arduous
You will tire and you will falter
As you forge into the darkness
Be wary of my faults
I am wrought with imperfections
In time you will witness your mistake
And it will be too late
I am a black hole
I draw you in without intention
But relish in the proximity of your attention
And before you can flee
To save yourself
My gravity has bound you
And without warning or fair word
I will mutilate you
Until the shards of who you were drift aimlessly
Across the path of my influence
And you will return to me
Your predisposition to belong to me
erodes your self preservation
Because the torture I inflict
Is what you crave
The sweet torment of what we are

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Very poetically emotionally dark composition! Almost like the spider playing with the fly; but with the fly stimulated by the attention! Great write ...

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Thanks for the review. Great to have someone understand my writing the way it was meant to be understood.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Kudos my friend ... have a great day!