i like him but he doesn't know

about the person I like but he doesn't know that

I like you but I

don't know if you like

me I don't know how to tell you

but I think you are with my friend

so I will wait I wish you know

but I am to scared to tell you

so you will never know

but all well we are friend

so right now that is good enough for me

I hope one day you like me to

Reviews

[Unicorn64]

skye amazing i love it keep up with the amazing work

love you your twin

[DarkArtz 0703]

I like it. I am 16 and I've felt like that so I completely understand. well done
~k

[JamieDarke]

Hi Raven ... A typical teenage lament. Couple of changes you might consider. Such as ...

so I will wait I wish you know (knew)

but I am to scared to tell you (too)

but all well we are friend (friends)

I hope one day you like me to (too)

[Skye Emily]

yeah thanks I will take that into concideration

[Victor Sage]

you can do it trust me xx and I feel your pain

[Sanbino Rodriguez-White]

I feel your pain and fear in this poem, I to like a person who doesn't know I exist it can be the hardest thing to cope with...

[Skye Emily]

yeah but we can get through it

[Sanbino Rodriguez-White]

Yes we can, great poem :)

[Skye Emily]

thank you so much