thought again

thought again

A Poem by ravena
"

the forbidden love has come back

"
My thoughts have came back for you
 I know there not right but I can get them out of my
mind. THere must be some thing i can do to get you out of my head
like you said before  you  have a man. but the the thing is your man is happy with u having a girl but i just don't want to be a sideline hoe i want  to be yours  or at least know that i matter to you
 I don't know why you popped in to my head earlier. but this is what happens when you do i go on these little rants about how i want you which is not good for my heath.  Well I just thought i would get this out of my head !



© 2011 ravena


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i know i have a lot of silly mistakes, but i was just writing off the top of my head


Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice i toldly understand this. But you should check some silly mistakes you made on your grammar. the poem was very intresting but i think there's something missing.

-Skye Blanco :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 19, 2011
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