Escape from Pee Wee's play house

A story I wrote in creative writing about a girl who is kidnapped !

April Sullivan is twenty-five years old, and is held against her will.
The place she is held can not be told, for if she did she would be turned into a shell
The place is quite strange, its known as PeeWee’s Playhouse.
April Sullivan plans to be in engaged.
The place is strange, the guy has a pet mouse, and
April Sullivan’s eyes are violet with   light blue
But the sad thing is she’s catching the flu
April has a friend named Jesse
she’s her best friend and she realized she was missing
She left the place messy
For she had no cause for living.
April screamed as the couch comes alive
It spread its mouth to speak and fluttered its eyes
It said kindly “Poor girl, do not be scared”
April cried Out“Please don’t hurt me, I was dared”
She took a deep breathe and searched for a way out
but the owner of the strange place looked evil and had doubt.
He’s tall skinny body made her want to throw up
then she says to him “why you need to grow up.”
He looked April’s way
and said “let’s play, and if you stay,
I’ll let you go free.”
As a smile curled his lips he moved closer to April
She backs into a corner  cause she could not flee
and nods ok.
She looked around for a way to escape.
With feelings of fear she closed her eyes
He shook her hand and said “Aw why so sad, it’s fate”
As he says those words a tear came from her eye
She looked at him and asked him to move away
PeeWee slowly moved away and told her dinner would be ready in a half hour
April was less frightened.
Jesse called a detective agency to searched for her
She thought of the night she’d stayed over
Telling scary story about the things that went on in PeeWee’s Playhouse
As  April gets ready for dinner to keep the deal she had made
She though of what if PeeWee broke his end of the deal
She would be stuck, how would she get out of there
She found the restroom window just fine
and would go through with the escape no matter what!
He yells and April runs down the stairs so the dinner
could move faster so she could be free of the evil place
 He sat at the end of the table she sat across from him.
he stared at her with a creepy grin.
As they sat and ate in each other company she raised her hand and asked to use the ladies room.
In an obnoxious voice he says “ hurry back!”
    she hurries away up the stairs  and in to the restroom.
         slamming the door behind her she locked it and opened the window.
 Stepping off the toilet She slides out the window feet first.
Then taking a deep breath she looks down and back up
closed her beautiful violet eyes  and jumped,
Landing   gracefully  she dust herself off and start to run.
She runs throw the forest and sees lighting up ahead she think hey
 Look civilization . Sprints up to the light to find...
A WALMART !

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Any story with Pee wee Herman scare me. I like the situation and how you described this story. A interesting kidnapping story. A excellent story.
Coyote