dream gone wrong

dream gone wrong

A Poem by ravena
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a girl and her lover reality she thought was a dream them realized it was reality

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Lovers  hear her scream but don't do anything
Lovers awake crying  remembering what just happen
 wish they could do  something  wish the roles where revers
 Her Love  cries trying to cope with the pain that was left on her
Cries for mom came from the next room.She get up and smile moving down the hall
she goes to the room where her and her lover decided to make a baby, looks down in crib picks
the child up holding her in her arm say to the little one that she will be with her forever
The baby smiles at her then closes her eyes and drift off to sleep.
She sets the baby back down in her crib  then close the door
Holding back tears  cause the baby look so much like her lover
 She walks down to her room looking at pictures on the wall
remembering  the good times of what use to be.

© 2011 ravena


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Tragic explains all when I read this. A heart wrenching piece spoken with few words. Great piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


OH! Ravena! This is one of the most heartfelt, beautiful, poems I've read in a long while!! What wonderful description of her emotions, it makes me want to cry with her!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I'm 19 years old love to write and love to bring people in a good mood i go to a place called BGSU in the most boring none fun place ever! There is one good thing about this place I have A bes.. more..

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