purpose

purpose

A Poem by ravena
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had a horrible day on TUESDAY!!

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What is my purpose why I'm I here!
 Do I even have a life after this? do I even have friends
I still wonder  what my life would be like if i lived at my dads' .
or If I died What would the people say about me ? Would
they even know I was here I know killing myself is not the answer.
but I just wonder . What would happen have i made a change . I know
I should not take what she said to heart but  it still Hurts.



I'M A BUTTERFLY LIFE IS GOING TO BE BETTER FOR ME. I'M IN MY chrysalis. Phase of life.

© 2011 ravena


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"If I died what would people say about me?" That sentence keeps grabbing my attention, cause I wonder the same thing all the time. Keep spreading your wings and mind, and I'm sure you'll make it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely feelings, sad, somewhat smitten. I feel, and empathize with you. I often question the same thing. Keep up the good work. The way you wrote this weaved these questions into the threads of my mind very intricately. The questions reverberate inside my head. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


You deleted our comment? If you can't take criticism, then you shouldn't be posting writing online. I am trying to help.

Now, once more with feeling.

This sounds quite a bit like a diary entry. Wrong 'here' at the beginning, your grammar is horrendous. Also. YOU'RE A BUTTERFLY IN YOUR chrysalis...

~The Half-Blood Princes

Posted 13 Years Ago



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