summer as gone

summer as gone

A Story by ravena

Summer is all most here
 the kisses from her rays touches all  of our skins
Summer don't die  we need you here
 summer! !
 sweet summer  we are calling for you.
 your sister has taken over and we are all terrified  of her!
 Your sister is cold and dark . But some people like her and then some people are two faced.
Summer ! are you there? Are you listening to us.
 shhh Winter  is here.
  Quite! we have to be quite now. Winter has said "you are never going to return!"
Not for a while.Help. should I go get help.  If I do From who ? from where?

© 2010 ravena


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yes! love the part of two faced people! so true.
This is a wonderful write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Bonjour Ravena! I must say, you perfectly described the magical way I had always perceived summer and winter, two sisters! my favorite line was: "The kisses from her rays touches all of our skins" :) And indeed, summer where have you gone? :(

Posted 13 Years Ago


OH, that's such a great poem!
It reminds me of a book, haha.
' Your sister is cold and dark '
I love how you describe winter, I think I am two faced as well, haha, I sometimes love summer, sometimes love winter! But I love summer better, winter is kinda TOO cold sometimes, but now the gree house effect changes everything. Ops, sorry, I am talking about green hous.
Back to the poem, this is totally a attractive read, full with enjoyment!
Nice written.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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