Rain

I am still working on a better title for this one.

Dance in the rain with me,
A slow waltz of two hearts.
Feel the raindrops on our skin
A secret passion for us.

Kiss me in the rain
Feel the warmth of my lips,
A contrast of passion
With the cool drops.

Make love to me in the rain
A natural pagan dance
Of two beautiful souls
As our Goddess celebrates us.

Hold me tight in the rain
As the sweet sweet drops
Fall upon our heated flesh
Hiding our love from others.

Say you love me in the rain.
Make our promises of forever
In a natural place that was
Created for only you and me

Reviews

[Rambling Prose]

After reading through this piece the title "Rain Man" came to mind. After all, it is he, to whom, you beckon.

nicely done...

This was an very good read. I had to read it twice because it was so good.

[Cats Eye]

I enjoyed reading this, the mixture between life and nature was an interesting combo, it kept me wondering on "what would happen next?" great write