Introduction

The introduction is a summary of what Anna has to go through. Will high school life get better for her?

If I could change anything about my…existence, it would be what I have become. Notice I say "what" and not "who." Every day I bring danger to those I love, with nothing more than my presence. I am a monster.

My depression has become like a cloud of darkness around my heart. Sometimes it consumes me, and I blow off assignments in school or cry myself to sleep. I’ve even resorted to cutting my wrists.

Keep in mind this tale is not one of fantasy, fairies or unicorns in a world of puffy white clouds, where a handsome prince saves a princess. No, this is a tale of the pain and suffering of being rejected by everything I once loved. It is a tale of an outcast who everyone fears, teases and stays away from.

My name is Anna Fae Tanner and this is my story.

Author's Note

I'm always open to CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Thank you for taking the time to read my book and chapter one will be out soon.

Reviews

[Lou Evans]

Ok. Some constructive criticism. Some people may like it when you flat out tell them about the character. I felt like I'm getting ready to read a script. It goes through telling you about the characters but it's soooo boring and doesn't really matter. You seem to have a nice character here although the name...personally, it bugs me. It's just one of those over the top cheesy vampire names. Extremly cliche. Try to be a little different and more original. Other than that back to what I was mainly trying to say. All of this information needs...

[Lou Evans]

to be shown and not told. I want to get to know the character throughout the novel. Not be told right up front. It's more exciting to see how the events effect the character and so on.

[RunsWithCats]

Wow, this intro was very well written, and I definitely want to read more. The way you wrote it catches ones attention, and it's hard not to want to read more. Great job overall and keep writing. -God Bless XD